My dove act..

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Postby Guest » 11/20/06 08:52 AM

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Postby Pete Biro » 11/20/06 12:02 PM

The Dove productions look fine. The cage production is lost, why bother? Also, the first moments we see you your hands/body seem too stiff.

Try to work body language to tie in better with the music.
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Postby Guest » 11/20/06 12:08 PM

Originally posted by Pete Biro:
Also, the first moments we see you your hands/body seem too stiff.
That really stuck out to me too -- when you first appear you're coming off a little robot like. Everything else seemed pretty smooth. Best of luck.
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Postby Guest » 11/20/06 12:18 PM

I don't get it.

Birds, purple suit, rainbow handkerchiefs, multiplying bird droppings, then hand on fire....?

Only a magician would use a lighter to light some string, to change into a giant candle, to light his cigarette, only to waste a perfectly good cig.

Well, actually hand on fire is pretty kewl.
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Postby Guest » 11/20/06 12:54 PM

Thanks for yours comment.

Andrly
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