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Postby Steve Cobb » 04/18/14 06:27 PM

There once was a large egg named Mabel,
Who tried to stand but wasn't able.
But her problem, you see.
Could be solved One, Two, Three,
If you first sprinkle salt on the table. :D
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Postby AJM » 04/18/14 06:32 PM

'was unable' scans better...
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Postby Brad Henderson » 04/18/14 07:57 PM

in trying to stand was unable
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Postby Ian Kendall » 04/19/14 05:28 AM

I think the 'But' is superfluous as well.
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Postby mrgoat » 04/19/14 06:22 AM

There was a young man from Gwent...
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Postby AJM » 04/19/14 07:18 AM

Maybe also the 'first' should come after 'salt' and not before 'sprinkle'.
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