Jeff Pierce Magic wrote:Wow, not sure if this is a joke or not but it sure is mean. Mr. Goat critisism is always welcome, feel free to actually add some.
Don't ask for criticism if you then moan about it if you don't like it Mr Pierce!
If you want more details:
1) It looks like you did it yourself.
2) You use 3 different fonts, just because you CAN use multiple fonts, doesn't mean you should
3) The illustration (added since last night) is bad, looks like it was taken from something else and had the folded card crudely photoshopped in
4) The additions since last night make no sense. 3 people holding a zippo and one holding a folded card. Why? I know it is meant to be like a big gig, but why would someone hold up a card at a gig?
5) The gradient yellow in the sign make it look like it is just a badly compressed gif.
I hope you didn't pay anyone for it. It's OK for an amateur.
I'll have a think and come up with what I consider better ideas later.